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This story reminds me of my kids and there fears of the dark. The author did a nice job of explaining scary scenes where the description of the scene feels ...

I was very impressed as well. The story should be developed more. The ideas and getting the reader hooked into the story. The part about the gravestone was very touching ...

I was confused reading this peice.throe story didn't make sense and church Norris line where did that come from. The reindeer sentence was good and it made sense. One important ...

ladybug, Liked your beginning paragraph way to real the reader in. The little boy ace shows that you Wanted to show us readers a real life example of none existence. ...

Review of this work is very well done with discription of her lost of a soulmate. I give this a 5 star rating and it was really interesting. Their is ...

I think the others comments were on point. The descriptive ideas were great and using the body as you did gave the poem some substance. The grammar specifically the capital ...

This poem has a deeper meaning then what the words say. Growing up I didn't understand how a mother affects your life. now that I work in a nursing home ...

The short story has a great moral reasoning behind it. I feel that the message was very opionated. I think the author needs to be a little more sensative to ...