emalily

thanks for the feedback!

The capitals indicate that it is a song

Whenever there is this many posts on a work I feel it's kind of pointless to give feedback as everything has already been said, but I couldn't resist telling you ...

yay it's so awesome! i didn't even read it but i know it's awesome because you wrote it!

Oh and i forgot to say you have a beautiful voice!!

Wow everything about this song is so beautiful! The lyrics, the melody and the video is great! Well done!

Ha, sorry. I originally typed this just for my own use, and I forgot to change it when I put it on here! Thanks :)

I quite like it :) I just have to say it's 'belief' not beleif.

thanks for the awesome reviews guys! if you would like to take a listen, here's the link, I posted it on youtube :/

the chords are Am, F, C and G I tried to upload myself singing it, but I couldn't figure out how to do it haha

Thankyou everyone :) I do have music to go with the lyrics :)

Oh I forgot to say the one thing I didn't like was the use of the word yak... maybe you could find a better rhyme for fact?

Thanks Tim :) and waywardbird :)

I like the idea of your poem, but I think in some parts the rhyming does seem a little forced. Sorry that's all I have to say!

Wow i really like this! I really like the title as well. I was going to tell you which line I liked the best but I couldn't pick one. I ...