-
Re: Perfect paper people
........I'm speechless. This....is....amazing! The sorrow in every letter tugged at my heart and made the meaning in everything find its definition by the depth of this poem's emotion. This is ...
Jul 31, 2014 -
Re: Poem by me, dog
This is really funny. The silliness of this made me smile and I'm really glad I happened upon it. I like everything about this poem, the fluidity, the characterization, the ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: Wake up now.
Hey, I thought that this was amazing. The imagery and repetition of it was really incredible. The way you described the situation made it simple to feel myself inside it. ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: Love Poem No. 3
This is really lovely. The picture you've painted here is determined, elegant, and clear. In six lines you brought me to an understanding of two people and their feelings for ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: My New Stranger
Hey, so first off I'd like to say that I think the emotions running through the words here are very clear and beautifully sad, but your rhyming needs quite a ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: you wont like me when you wake
Wow, I don't know what the history behind this is or what inspired it, but I LOVE this poem! The strongly opinionated voice shocks you into the story's surroundings and ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: Sky
Hello, so I think that this has a great concept. The romantic idea is really beautiful. I liked the clarity in your imagery. You made the distance between the Earth ...
Jul 30, 2014 -
Re: The Red-Handed Handmaiden
I think the imagery of this is incredibly morbid (that's a good thing in this poem's case). The portrayal of the handmaiden comes off so sinister and malicious just within ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Peace in Solitude
Hi, I wanted to tell you that I think the emotion and experience behind all of this is really beautiful. I can see how much you cared about whoever it ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: See you
Wow, this is really gorgeous. The pain and sadness in every line tugs at your heartstrings as you're reading this and every word really makes you feel the longing and ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Don't Look at Me and See a Stranger
This is really amazing. Everything about it shouts the message you're trying to give against bullying, against fear of each other, against fear of ourselves, and the lives we're desperate ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Silverfish
This was perfect! I LOVE it SO much. I've always felt so much more personally inclined to my library, being angry when people tore pages or spilled food on the ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Seaside Wanderings
Hey wisegirl22, I think that this poem, for it's length and the subject it's thriving off of, it's very good. I love the way you made me read it in ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: There are exactly four walls separating us
I love this. I think that the amount of depth, love, and pain that you've exhibited in this short poem is amazing. I thought this flowed really well. I had ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Would You
Hello, I thought that this was very well written on the terms of imagery, description, and emotion. The way you put things together from each piece of the growing story ...
Jul 27, 2014
