electricbluemonkey

This is awesome, Sam. Kinda reminds me of British humor, and of Adams' style. Its hilarious plus the description is great that I could actually imagine the scene. Nice. Very ...

Wow, nice TBR, very nice. Thats really deep. Thats great, and I can really see how you feel. I love all the figurative language you put in there. They worked ...

Is that a question or a statement? Cause I already made my point.

Very interesting review...I would say the same thing.

Very painful... These are some of these...middle school rhymes that everyone made up.

Lmao. That is the most disturbing comic I have ever seen. IT RAWKS! *Calms down and acts civilized*. I, uh...love the delightful shading...or something like that... Yeah, and really, we ...

Hmm, wow, I never thought about it that way. That was very, how do I put this, interesting and iformative. *Glares at I-Pod*. And yet...

The only thing that still annoys me is the punctuation and the capitals. You really need to add commas, periods and capitalize "I" and beginnings. But I guess poetry is ...

That was very unique. A good topic to write on, although I didn't get some of the ideas that you put on. What is this poem really about, apart from ...

It was a good poem, but I don't really understand what your point was to the reader. It was very different than others, and just a bit childish. But the ...

Yeah, really great poem. Short but sweet. Not a lot of detail, but I loved the idea. Very good.

Why'd you post this two times, Sophie? You only need one. You should delete this thread, but I guess its a bit different due that it is in paragraph form. ...

Yeah, very good. A good short read. Although I do think it needs a much better title. The regular title just makes it seem a little racy, dont you think? ...

Yeah, it was very different that others. Pretty unique, and was a good fast read. The "ye, yer, and yells" were very unique. I never actually read a poem written ...

Yeah, that was a very good poem. Very detailed and a good read. Although I agree with Ravenna, that line didnt really fit. You should change it to something else, ...