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Hey there! Here to review as promised. Okay, so first of all, I kind of actually really enjoyed the premise for this piece. The cafe idea is ridiculously adorable and ...

Hey there! Isha here to review. First of all, I thought that the idea for this poem was really sweet. The last line was my favourite, and I appreciated the ...

Okay, so I read like all of your poetry and I kind of pretty much love every piece you throw out. So I thought I'd attempt to actually review one, ...

And again! This one, I had mixed feelings about. On one hand, a lot of your imagery was really strong, and really quite well-done. In most parts of the poem, ...

Isha here to review again, as requested! And wow, this one, I really liked. There isn't much here that I want to pick apart, because the poem was fairly simple, ...

Hey there! Here to review as requested. :) First of all, I enjoyed the concept of this poem. The writing in and of itself was pretty decent as well. And ...

Hey there! Isha here to review as requested :) I must say, the idea for this story was pretty excellent. The writing was good, and the character's thoughts on death ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review. :) And wow. I've gotta say, the idea for this piece is unique and pretty dang brilliant. True to life as a piece ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review :) So, overall, I really liked this piece. I don't know if there will be much to this review, because there isn't much ...

Hey there! Isha here for a review :) So, this was a really interesting piece, if I do say so myself. Your prose and your imagery was pretty dang gorgeous, ...

Hey there! here to review as requested (sorry for the slight delay). Okay, so, there are certain interesting aspects of this story. The group dynamics, for example. You have an ...

Hey there, Horrendous. Isha here to review as requested. Sorry for the minor delay :P Alright, so you said that you wanted some help with character development, so I'm going ...

Hey, Hayden! Here as you so kindly requested. And- wow. So, you totally asked me to review this, and I'm not entirely sure how to. There are a few things ...

Isha here to review as requested! Sorry for the little delay in getting here. First of all: Heaven help me, I think this is the first time I've read a ...

Hey, Gaurav. Isha here to review as requested :) And firstly, I read Dreamy's review and your responses to it, and for a first attempt at a short story, this ...