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I'm a little late on the draw here.... This is very, very interesting indeed! I still do wish that we got more scenes between when Andrea leaves and when she ...

Comments, suggestions, and corrections in red. Those three words… That’s all I have to say. Just tell her, come on… you might regret it afterwards if you don’t. My instinct ...

Personally I liked this a lot. The chorus was my favorite part out of the whole thing...although it seemed to make up pretty much most of the song. Is there ...

Well, I'm not from Idaho; but I liked this none the less. The only part I didn't really like was: Found only in Idaho and India It didn't really...fit. It ...

My master! From the professors of criticism Loved this line! One of my favorites in the whole poem! Your putrefying enjoyment as you feed off me! This was another one ...

this was sort of a pointless poem, but I loved it! I agree with stelagineva, the .I didn’t know forks could get bruises part was my favorite! Although I don't ...

Chapter-6 Olivia 8:13 AM I thought that it was going to be the last time I would hear her voice, or see her. I heard it again. As I was ...

Sorry it took so long to get here! One thing: Dr is an abbreviation and should be Dr. Either that or Doctor. I think I know what this is about.... ...

Awwe, this was a good way of course. I liked it, it was rather well done as the others said. It's a time that lots would like to forget...and though ...

I feel defeated. I apparently didn't get here in time... Everybody seems to have pointed out everything that needs fixing.... I still really like this story! It's interesting and demands ...

Wow. That was...creepy...and amazing. I can't believe how she would have felt...I'm guessing that that last face was either the police officer or the predator? Somebody needs to be put ...

So I'm writing a novel thing for this contest. This is the first chapter :) I don't like the title so if you could find an awesome one, kudos to ...

Not bad, not bad at all. In fact it was great! There are just a few things I'm unclear on. A suggestion would be to make it clear that Viv ...

As promised, I made it here! xD Oh, and you asked if I did art? I do...but they won't be the best. Well, it seems that most of things have ...

Any comments, suggestions or corrections are in red! :D Chapter 1 The rain pounded harder than ever on the windshield, making it more and more difficult to see where I ...