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Hey, Isha here to review! I want to start by saying that this has a good flow, and the occasional flash of fresh imagery. There was a line that really ...

Hey, Isha here to review. :) The first thing I want to say about this poem is that it's not bad, but it's not incredible, either. It has some fresh ...

Oh my gosh Fluffy xD Do you have any idea how much you made me laugh while I read this? I was going to be cool and write you a ...

Hello, Isha here to review. ^-^ All right, so to start off I would like to say that you said at first, "This needs work." I have to agree. You ...

Hey, Isha here to review. :) First off, I would like to say that the lack of punctuation and capitilization is the first thing that threw me off. Even before ...

Isha here to review! First off, I would like to say that this was an excellent piece! Like Pall said, suicide poems usually aren't very good, as the idea is ...

Hey, Ish here to review. ^-^ I'll start off by saying this: The poem wasn't necessarly aweful, but it wasn't wonderful, either. Like Pall said, it's all so overused. The ...

What is life without you? What is life without us? It’s like night without darkness, It’s like day without light. I have to agree with Lumi about the fist stanza. ...

Storm A brilliant sun with skies so blue, The day so warm, and flowers in bloom. Clouds roll in, dark and low, The sun now hidden as the rain pours ...

Hey, Isha here. Just one thing I would like to say right off the bat: Lengthy poems are my favourite. :P Don't worry about how long they are too much. ...

My smile fades away as memories tug at the corner of my mind. Replaying you, what seemed like, perfection over and over. I really liked these two stanzas. They flowed ...

Wow, I don't have much to say. I hate to write an unhelpful response, but there isn't much bad to be said. I loved it. :] I agree! I would ...

Oh gosh, I feel like an IDIOT. xD I had this finished, but turns out I didn't hit submit. >.> I hit 'save' again. Ahahaha...oops. I hope you haven't edited ...

Hey Ris! Corrections and that sort of thing are highlighted in red. The epic stuff that was really well written and all of that in purple. My own comments are ...

Wow! Alright so I'm finally here! Alright, so corrections and such are highlighted in red. The epic stuff is highlighted in purple! And my own comments are in bold. If ...