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Hello Ican! *reviews* First of all, I want to say that this poem had its ups and downs. There were areas that really provoked thought, and then some that bored ...

Sop! I am here - again! Well, not here, but I am at one of your works. Yeah. *Reviews* So, first of all, I'll say that I absolutely adore this ...

Hey Shadow, I'll review this for you. ^^ Fist off, you probably don't want harsh crits, so sorry if this comes off as such. (I'm medium-harsh when it comes to ...

Hello Smy! I'll review this for you if that's okay. ;) First off, the first line: Material things weather and age, Did you mean 'wither'? I noticed that and thought ...

Hey Ican! So, I read over this poem and I really quite liked it. I'll start with what I did like about it and move onto what I liked a ...

Dono. Here as requested. I suppose that I'll start by saying that overall, I really did enjoy this. The voice was so clear, and the writing was excellent. Had this ...

Hey Mel! Here as you requested! Right off the bat, I'll tell you that this poem started off very well. This is the second poem today I've reviewed with a ...

Sop. Okay. So, since this isn't really a serious poem, it's pretty hard to give a serious review. I'll start off by saying that by the end of this, I ...

Leza. I am here-- and exhausted. *pants* So, you want a style review, am I right? Well, I don't know how good I am at those, so I don't know ...

Milky. I am here as requested. ^^ First off, upon reading this I have to say that it was very well-written for the most part. I'm not quite sure if ...

Hey Lette! Okay, so... um... this will probably be a really short, really pointless review. Azila and Shrubs seem to have gotten everything in the concept down, and Rhino [Skins] ...

Hey Cafe! Here as you requested. ^^ The first thing I did upon reading this poem was click on the 'like' button. (I actually remembered to do that this time!) ...

Kagi. I am finally here. I would have done this way early yesterday morning, but I wasn't feeling that great xD So! You all ready have quite a few reviews ...

H'okay, so, for once as far as I can tell, I'm the first one here. xD (If somebody finishes a review before I finish this one-- then I'm the second ...

I am here. Again. Getting sick of me yet? I thought so. 8) You've all ready got some very in-depth reviews here, so this will probably be extremely brief. The ...