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Thanks for all the comments friends.... I really appreciate them... And well mazzi i don't know whether i am skilled or not but sometimes it just comes out of my ...

Its short and good.... You better try to lengthen it... It can be a very heart touching and realistic if you add more into it... Keep up the great work... ...

WOW. That is the only expression which i had when i read this piece... Really very impressive... Keep up the good work... :)

Good work but its a little bit short... Better improve it and make it a bit big... Keep up the good work... :)

Good piece of work... Great use of words... Really very impressive... Keep up the good work mate... :)

Great work... It's just AWESOME.... WOW... I'm a fan buddy... Keep it up... :)

Good work... A good rhythm... Yes you should try adding some more lines to it... It will be much more better.... Non the less great job... keep it up....

Its a good work mate and there is nothing it that we could be able to rip it to shreds.... Keep up the good work... :)

By gay i meant happy....

Great work... Just love it... Especially the lines in italics are just outstanding.... Impressive work mate... Keep up the good work.... :)

really a interesting piece of work.... good going with the words.... and the flow is very good.... keep up the good work....

good work.... good narration.... i know how hard can it be to write a story which rhymes i myself write poems but im still a beginner...... keep up the work..

beautiful... marvelous... it relates to each and every lover in this world.... really very touching... keep up the good work... :)

Great use of words and good rhyming.... and a very original idea... One of the best works i saw today.... keep up the good work... :)

It is a great poem.... Good use of words and wonderful rhyming.... And yes it is the best way to end a year.... Happy New Year... Keep up the good ...