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Re: In the beggining
Its a good piece... Good work with the words but i think that the poem forced in being so long.... All in all its satisfactory... Keep up the good work.... ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Ode to the Bench
It was a good yet short ode... But it has a very abrupt end... Was not at all convincing.... It could have been more longer and more detailed... Try working ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Remember
A good poem mate... It surely invokes emotions and that is really good... It somehow or the other will always relate to the reader... Really a very good one... It ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Stolen
Me too could not really get the concept... What is it all about??? It was good but the flow was not continuous but kept on going off track... Good work... ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Starlight
WOW... This is the best word to describe this poem... Great work mate.... :D Good use of words and great vocabulary.... :) I loved how you personified the celestial bodies.... ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Symptoms of love
Hey its me Ehte.... Good poem not that bad as you said... But it has got some flaws but it can be outdone... Like put the with and the in ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: These Silent Nights
It is a really good piece.... Good use of colors as said above and yes the last stanza was not good you could work on that to make the poem ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: The Rebel Teen's Sister*EDITED*
It is good but not great... It could have been great if you would have not made lines such large and if you have not tried to rhyme all... I ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Dawn
Great work buddy... And the title of the poem is just too good... The flow is really marvelous and the small lines give a different look to the poem... It ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Of Endless Summer Days and Daffodils
Marvelous.... Its a one word that precisely describes this piece... It had the perfect flow along with some good rhythm.... And as said above you have some great vocabulary... By ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: How Can I Forget?
It isn't such a good work mate.... As mentioned above there are a lot of repetitions and it isn't good... And you did not get the right flow... After reading ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: ...and them I smiled
A good work mate... But you have arranged it in such a way that it looks like a short story... Better try using some punctuations and slice the lines and ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Whispers of Rebellion [Locked for Spamming]
A good piece.... What should i call it?? CUTE... A simple work and too short and guess if you lengthen it then it would be more attractive... And everything else ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: I Hate You
A really good piece bu its a bit short it would be better if you lengthen it... It invokes raw emotions and its the best part of it... And as ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Honey I Love You
Buddy you really got some talent and it shows in your work over here.... I too myself try to write lyrics but end up writing a simple poem... Its not ...
Jan 5, 2011