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As for now, I'm glad that this is already the fourth chapter and you start paying attention to the questions. I guess, this is the perfect "breather" chapter – despite ...

Protection of a sick child by his family from the queen who killed those people who were sick attracted my attention at once, and an interaction between Dani and Sophie ...

Team Egg! I liked this very much! This is not a typical narrative but rather a reflective essay and I think it works really well. The narrator Yorick has an ...

A truly sweet story in essence, but it kept my mind going all through it. The voice of Raisa appears quite realistic considering her age and determination. I also appreciated ...

Hi! I really loved the imagery in this poem. The comparison of the speaker to a heliotrope makes the emotions feel clear. The same thing goes for the garden imagery ...

The scene focuses on the growing emotional distance between Kyle and Ben rather than relying on a dramatic argument. The tension is believable, and I liked how Kyle's anxiety comes ...

Personally, I thought the strongest part was Laughing Jack's perspective. The way he treats Aeliana while secretly planning to use her soul makes him much more interesting and disturbing. That ...

The tension builds quickly, and I liked that Sam is trying to convince himself that Lazari isn't necessarily a threat, even though her appearance suggests otherwise. The contrast between what ...

Spun the review roulette! It started with a peaceful atmosphere, and I was surprised to see the letter appear so quickly, which made it more unsettling. Nice contrast between Poppy's ...

I liked how thoughtful this scene felt. It doesn't rely much on action, instead letting us look into Jason's thoughts. The line about secrets boiling up inside of him was ...

I really enjoyed reading these clips. Gabriel definitely stood out to me most of all. His sensitivity feels genuine, and I felt so bad reading scenes like the one with ...

At first, I was super overwhelmed lol. I think Victor's personality is definitely the highlight. His sarcastic and humorous personality is constant even during serious moments, which gives him a ...

Hi! Me again. I really like Ilna so far. She's already interesting, and I feel bad for her and her mom. The way you describe Miu's memory problems is heartbreaking ...

Morning I love the line: “It falls as hope always must before beginning; humble to triple its wonder once it grows.” The imagery of the seed falling and growing is ...