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I especially liked the simplicity yet depth of this poem. The reaction of the speaker to being accused of imitation was very relatable, and I enjoyed the way how the ...

The developments presented in Chapters 9 and 10 have only reinforced the creepy mysterious atmosphere established with Ceciliana earlier in the story. Rosemary's attempts to make others believe that H

I have not read the prologue, however Chapter One sets me up just fine! The way this chapter introduces the character of Joan before telling the main story is very ...

Question for you: Is there a reason you posted these chapters together rather than one by one? It made me happy to see how you managed to establish the conflict ...

Hello Ayme! Chapter Three seems like the perfect follow-up, considering how both Sen’s relationship with Valko and Vesna’s feelings are evolving. No deep-teal shirt, no broad shape rising above th

Hello creeper!! This story had an incredibly straightforward setup, and I loved the innocence it carried. The bittersweetness is created by the fact that Cadell does something wrong, but the ...

I LOVE romantasy — it’s my favorite genre — so I’m very interested in seeing where you take this!

I haven't read one of your other works before, but I am very excited! :) I was very impressed by the poem due to its high level of intimacy and ...

Hello ToastK! I saw this in the green room, and the name stood out to me. This reflective tone of this poem is something that I really enjoyed. It gives ...

I liked the concept of this poem very much! Despite the fact that you've written it while bored, I managed to find quite a few interesting images and paradoxes in ...

It’s nice to read/review another one of your poems! The frequent usage of the word "complain" contributes to the obsessive circularity of the whole poem, fitting the theme of complete ...

It was nice to see how you show that Eurymachus understands that he has done something wrong, however, he makes his last attempt in order to be able to go ...

Onward to Chapter Two! 😁 I really enjoyed how this chapter opened up Vesna beyond just the world of football. It really sets up Vesna's fatigue from magazine work immediately ...

Alright, let's get into this one! :) The setting is established effectively at the beginning, and I enjoyed the heat of the car park and the air conditioning dying with ...

This is a lovely read! I’ll be sure to check out more of your works another time. It seems that the speaker is dealing with resentment, sickness, guilt, and the ...