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Re: The Lone Lily
Anything good about it??!!??
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Today
heyyy :D I really like this, good job. Keep Writing! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Nothing's gonna be okay
W.O.W!!! I wish I could write like you, this is just pure talent. Keep writing!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: All Dressed in Black -A Ballad
heyyy i like it!!! it works really well, do you play an instrument cuz if you do you should come up with a tune for it! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Wind
This is fantastic, amazing use of metaphors. You capture emotions perfectly, get a damn good publishing deal. XXX
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Sappy Love Poem
Hi, I really like this poem, it's kind of tradditional with a realistic approach. Keep Writing. BTW love the pic. XXXX
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: January 24th
Love it!
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: To The Boy In The Red Feathers
Hey :D Great poem!!! It's all true aswell which is even better, because people can relate to it. Nice work! Keep Writing X
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Unknown Emotion
Hey, I love this piece. I agree with all of what WaywardBird said. I just loved it, keep writing it! XxX
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: New Year's Romance
Hey, It's perfect, the perfect New Year's romance! I love it, well done! Happy New Year!!! Keep Writing XxX
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: My friend Wacky.
Thanks, I really appriciate your advice! XxX
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Mask
Hi, Your poem is really effective. The impression it makes on you is quite impressive, and it's very dramatic (wise move putting it in dramatic, LOL)!
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Special
Wow, well let me tell you, it worked! Good job! I agree with the others you do have to re-read it and think about it. Plus it will mean something ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Despair
Cool, kind of weird but cool. I think you should keep writing, but I'm not really sure where you could take this. Therefore keep writing it because I have no ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: The Most Wonderful Time of the Year
Ahhhh, that was really cute! XxX
Dec 26, 2010
