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This poem is very sweet. I liked reading it. My firecracker, my wildcat, my onetwothree and four. should there be spaces between the three numbers, or did you purposely do ...

This made me laugh! It does get annoying after a while though... :D Anyway, It's really good, and it sort of gives me the thought of maybe a rebellion building ...

Okay, so I really enjoyed reading your poem! It's really, really good! The golden elixir has spilled for only you. I really liked this part! It was pretty! I am ...

Hi! Overall, I really liked reading the poem. I like the repetition of "I'm sorry." at the end of each stanza too. It adds to the whole thing and gives ...

You were right, I do wonder what happens next. I can't wait to read what happens! Anyway, I saw a few little things. They pasted me and went for my ...

First of all, hi! Anyway, I really liked it. It was dark and somewhat mysterious, and the title is very fitting. That's really good. I personally love reading dark things. ...

Clarity Pyramid HATE Loathing abhorrence Breathing hard, fists clenched I bare my teeth at them daring them to come forward. "End discrimination. Hate all" I found this poem very strong ...

I really liked this poem. It was very emotional, like the narrator has some deep anger inside and is letting it out very calmly. That's epic. Just as Glim mentioned, ...

“Who are those guys?” I could hear her mother ask. After I read where Josh pointed to her mom, I was waiting for her mom to ask this. That makes ...

This poem is very heartfelt and that makes it awesome. I'm going to guess that the narrator used to be close to their aunt, and now, they have drifted apart ...

It does sound really cool! I really enjoyed reading it. I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes or anything, so yeah. :) You seem like you are really good with description ...

I really liked it! I didn't see any errors. Plus I think the previous comments covered all the mistakes, so yeah. :) I was wondering about the phrases that were ...

Hi! Okay, before I say anything else, I have one question. Where is the romance? I mean, it sounds like it could lead up into to romance somewhere later on, ...

Oh my gosh! Awesomest poem ever! This is better than some of the poems I had to analyze for school! I love the ABCB rhyme thing. Like I have mentioned ...

I'm really sorry about your horse! :( At first when I was reading it, I was thinking about a dog or something, then at the end, I was like, "Oh! ...