dystopianmonkey01

Thank you Amelie, yeah all my friends say the same, I need to work on that. It's just, some simple words don't do justice to particular emotions! haha!

Yeah, in that case, stick with simple vocab, yeah. I think it depends on the audience to be honest :) and no problem, but I did feel quite popular when ...

Damn, totally awestruck. 'Tis really sad, and brings back painful memories of loved ones. I love it. For me, I would have preferred if it were a tad more to ...

Thanks Aley, very, very helpful. I'll definitely work on these things you've mentioned, thanks for the time spent giving this feedback! :D

Hey! Thanks! Much appreciated :)

Oh okay. In that case, don't change a thing!

Great! Very concise, to the point. I like that in poems. Sometimes simplicity is great. One thing I must commend you for is how this writing flows. Not necessarily with ...

Of course, if you could do the same?

Wow, I love this. I do think that you could have possibly made the stanzas a bit longer as the shortness of the stanzas and the length of the poem ...