dystopianmonkey01

Thank you!

beautiful imagery here. quite gorey, i might add. very dark.

Thanks very much! :D

Haha, thank you :)

Thanks Nikayla, this was really helpful. The reason the majority of my writings are so short is because, simply put, it's a real pain to read through 20 or so ...

Thanks!

Much appreciated!

thank you very much

This was beautiful. Only thing is in the last stanza you wrote the wrong 'than'. it should be then :)

Thanks for your review. I totally agree with the 'battle' part, I think it was a spelling error, oops. I need to work on them! I also agree with the ...

Thanks Dan! Yeah this was meant to be prose, I really don't favour the line format, you have to 'live up to' the aesthetics of just a normal poem with ...

In the first paragraph: *chamber, sorry!

This is good. How does your title relate to the poem though?

*a semicolon rather than a comma, not colon XD

Hello, thank you for this!! My initial thought process with the imagery was the latter, but after editing not it I realised that it could be however someone interprets it. ...