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Thanks so much once again! I think I meant to have Gormin be a proctor and not a Lt. hence the lack of moniker. I'll have to change that so ...

I love the positive comments but it is the critiques that will make it better so don't worry about putting too many of those in. One comment though is that ...

I'm very likely to make all the corrections you mentioned. I'm so glad you're enjoying and I know it is going to turn out even better because of your feedback.

Thanks so much for the review, and it is really good to see one from you again. As for the review style... I'm not sure if it is better or ...

This was great! I love how there have been so many different views of Steven from reviewers. I can't wait to reveal more about his darker side (every character has ...

I am always grateful for your grammar corrections, and I'll definitely look into mentioning Dominic's shirt/clothes change and the crowd's presence more often. Thanks so much :)

Thanks once again for the great review. You may continue to find quite a few grammar errors in Wing 1 and 2 but I am still so grateful for your ...

Don't worry if the works you review are old or new, (especially in the case of this book) because I love even just seeing your reaction to my story as ...

So excited to see what you think! Enjoy catching up ;)

Thanks so much! I loved your comments and grammatical corrections. I do plan to have an editor go through this with me eventually to correct errors like the ones you ...

Your reviews are also quick and very enjoyable to read. Very insightful too. So glad you are enjoying my story.

I'm so glad you're enjoying Jarid's character, and I hope you also enjoy the rest of the cast I'm building. I look forward to hearing from you in the future ...

Thanks for your comments on the narration. I'm glad I came across as consistent. :)

This was the perfect halfway point where I could leave off on for the summer. I am so glad you made the connection to Scorch and how his betrayal is ...

I%u2019m so glad the giants went over well. I was worried the puns might be too much. I also tried to use a detail about their creator that would be ...