dragnet

First, i noticed that you are new here, so welcome! Now, enough sweet talk. Here are my comments. One, it was ok. Second, his braided hair would not get in ...

I think that the story was really good. It was interesting and there was parts that I hadn't thought that was coming. In the begining, I thought that you had ...

Wow, that is a really good prolouge. It's very interesting, but I think that you should leave it alone and totally forget about it for about a week, then come ...

Wow, that was pretty amazing and really good. It was a very nice story about the sudden clash of lives and how a little inconvience could change people's lives. It ...

She walks upon the sea grass? It should be sea of grass, but since after that you say that she looks upon the sea, I would go with just plain ...

I don't think that it was very good. It was okay, but I strongly suggest that you do not base your poems off of books and such. Base them off ...

I think that it was a very well-constructed poem that reflects a lot of people's feelings, and that is how a good poem becomes a great poem. If everyone can ...

Today was September 2nd, the first day of school. For Kerry, it was the last first day of school. She found it hard to believe that she was already a ...

Once again this is not a long piece but i will say that i really liked it more than the last one it is so good i will end up ...

hey. I know that tthis isn't one of those super long reviews where people point out every little mistake but i will tell you how i truely feel with out ...

Methinks it was good. Me likey! Me like you! Methinks you good! Methinks you good good! Methinks you good good for junior writer. Methinks I be junior writers too, so ...

I don't read land of sun, land of rain, but when I saw that you only had two more chapters to go, I had to come and say this... You ...

Oh, okay. *sheepish grin* I was kind of worried at first. I was jetting between all the prolouges and other chapters because I thought I missed something. Then it said ...

Sorry, but it's quite confusing. It's hard to keep track over who was talking and if Alison really was being insulting. If she was, why would everyone say she wasn't? ...

Hey, Emo! Nice work, but I do have some comments. First, why are they in a cave and how did they get there? Why didn't Mir come with them if ...