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Alright, I didn't completely remake the entire chapter, but I did do tons of editing. Tell me what you think now, if you would like to re-read it again that ...

Thanks!

Thanks for the review.

Thanks so much for the review. Chapter two is out by the way, if you would like to give it a review!

Thanks. I'm really fascinated with second person (or using 'you' instead of I or she, he, it.) I recently read a couple books like that and I wanted to try ...

Thanks I'm glad you liked it

Your welcome anytime.

Thanks Corgi ~Dogs~

Oh thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks so much, I guess I didn't realize how many mistakes I made. I'm not the best at making rhyming poems, and I've really never been that good at it. ...

Thanks

Thanks I'm really glad you liked it.

xD

I did enjoy it! Thanks for writing it!

Yeah!