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Re: Circles and Squares
Hello. Dogsrule5 here to review! Let's start with nitpicks. I only saw one nitpick and that is... We had out little gang Of hearts and stars and diamonds But we ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: My sister sings songs
This was really good. Good job on it. Okay let's start with categories. 1. Grammar: Your grammar is really good. 2. Spelling: Your spelling was also really good. 3. Punctuation: ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Another Truth: Hope
Hi! Dogsrule5 here for a review. I thought this poem was beautiful and poetic. It was really good. I really liked it. It is true. Everyone needs hope sometimes, and ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Winter Comes to June
Hi. Dogsrule5 here for a review!!!! XD! This was really good, but kind of short. I mean I totally understand, why it is short, but I think you could make ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: Memory
Hi. Dogsrule5 here to review! First of all this was a really good poem. It was very beautiful and poetic. Grammar. Your grammar was good. Spelling, was good also. Good ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: How To Train Your Dragon Chapter 4- Secrets Of The Element Caster
Okay, so first off this was really good. It was really long, but yet it had so much detail! I like things that have a lot of detail. This was ...
Jun 19, 2014 -
Re: They Say...
Hi! Dogsrule5 here to review! First of all I thought this poem is really good. I really liked it, and I liked the tune. It kind of sounded like a ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: I Love This Website!!!
Hi, Dogsrule5 here to review. First of all for a new writer and for a first poem, I have to say this was really good! I really think you are ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Love in the time of Curfew
Hey, Dogsrule5 here for a review. This was really good, I liked what you were trying to say. It's really interesting and different, but that is why I liked it. ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: The Lost Island: Chapter 2
This was really good, and really detailed. Especially for a new writer. Good job! I really like this series, it was a really good idea. I like how you are ...
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: The Lost Island: Chapter 1
This is really good for a starter. I really liked what you did to this. This was really good. For a first timer i didn't see many mistakes. The only ...
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: Shadow Friends
This was really good. I really liked it. I liked the emotion and effect. It was really beautiful and poetic. First off, I didn't see any big mistakes. I am ...
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter fifteen part one - Series finale! Making it long so there will be parts.
Let's start with nitpicks. 1: This is only a suggestion, but you don't have to change it.... There is a solution. You just have to find it. I found two ...
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: 1
This was really good and I cant pick a favorite part because they were all my favorite parts. I really like the feelings and the emotion. The battle she cant ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: 1
First of all... This was really good. I really like how you chose to do a poem like this. It's awesome. Second of all... I didn't see many mistakes. I ...
Jun 9, 2014