dogsrule5

Great work. You know I haven't really seen anyone who was able to say the message of the poem, or say what they were trying to say, like the theme ...

I laughed at the end of this poem, which is a good thing. This was a really good poem, and your rhyming scheme was terrific! Great job. Your grammar seemed ...

I am a big fan of music, and love reading others lyrics. I thought this was really good. This is a good song that people will love. Of course, I ...

Hello! It's me Dogs and I'm here to review this awesome amazing poem. I really love this poem. I did find one nitpick. It's a punctuation nitpick, but I'm not ...

This is a very good poem. I really like your writing style. The way you worded everything was really amazing to me. I thought this was a very good poem, ...

Great job, for your first poem that is... So I am going to point out your mistakes. (We call them nitpicks.) *Just saying* Nitpick #1: When you meet my friends, ...

Hey, I see your new to YWS. So welcome. I really enjoyed reading this. You do make a point. It is hard to find your true bff though. I'v had ...

Hey Dogs here for a review! First off I want to say welcome to the YWS! :) Your work was very good and it had meaning!!! Great work I am ...

What a great poem. I must say comparing someone to a scenery is.... Beautiful. I really like you writing style and if I were to rate this... Well it would ...

Hey Em! Dogs here and I am here to review!!! Not many nitpicks I saw, but there might be a few that I missed, but everybody does it, no need ...

This is a great chapter one. I really like it, but I think that it could use some more detail. So let's start with nitpicks. -Nitpicks. 1. In paragraph 2 ...

Hey. OMG! I love this lyrical words. To me the words make sense. I love lyrics, but yet for some reason I don't read them a lot. In my opinion ...

I love this book! Dogs here for a review! Great book, I love your writing style and techneique. Sorry I'm a bad speller! Now.... I didn't find much nitpicks, but ...

Hey Dogs here and a great poem indeed!! Let's start with nitpicks... 1) Why won't they help us papa? Why won't they give us their food? I'm hungry mama. This ...

I thought this poem had a great since of style, and was awesomely amazing! Hey, hey, hey Dogsrule5 here, but always, now and then, call me Dogs! So nice to ...