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Re: The Chord That Lasted Forever
Hello there Magpie! Tucker here with your review as requested! Lovely job fitting in the Egyptian mythology in to your writing. I really love poetry that incorporates mythology into its ...
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Re: Untitled
Well goodness, how could I ever say no to a review when you ask so nicely :). Dogs up and at your service! Let's jump right in now shall we? ...
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Re: She Wants Revenge
Hello there Meg! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, to start things off WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if you ...
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Re: [deleted]
Hello there Elinor! Dogs here with your review. Ok, two quick comments: firstly, the entire description should be in italics. Secondly there should be a comm after "seat" in this ...
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Re: Bed of Roses
Hello there Goku! Dogs here with your review today. Alrighty, excellent piece of writing here. I truly enjoyed reading this piece. You have excellent and smooth rhyming that doesn't once ...
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Re: From a By-Now-Late Master to His (Nineteenth) Beloved Cat
Hello there Wind! Tucker here with your review today :). Lovely piece you have here, really excellent imagery. I thought the writing format you chose to use was interesting, you ...
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Re: Blink
Hello there Magpie! Tucker here with your review today. Well well! I am really happy to see a much different writing approach from you. Outside of your usual formatting and ...
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Re: The Bungalow Tree
"against the sting of the desert sand." Hello there CrayCray! Dogs here with your review, to start off try to omit all useless words in your writing whenever you can. ...
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Re: Friends
hello there Pumpkin! Dogs here with your review today. Firstly, if I may say, WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if you need ...
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Re: My Goodbye
Hello there Misstoria! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, lovely piece you have going on here. Excellent piece of writing you have here, an incredibly cliche and overused ...
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Re: Monsieur De Lacey
hello there Searria! Dogs here with your review today :). Well I certainly was greatly anticipating this sonnet of yours. Fortunately, sonnet's are a strong suit of mine from all ...
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Re: [removed]
Hello there Vee! Dogs here with your review today! Firstly, if I may start with WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here. I'm Tucker, and if you ...
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Re: losing the girl
Hello there Gim! Dogs here with your review today. Firstly, if I may say: WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, I'm Tucker :). If you ever ...
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Re: Time
Hello there Clarity! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, excellent piece here. You have some great writing and a good sense of rhythm in your writing. There are ...
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Re: Four Cigarettes and an Odd Amount of Alcohol
Hello there life! Dogs here with your review today :). Alrighty, interesting beginning connecting it to Lincoln's speech "four score and seven years ago..." although, I'm not sure that the ...
Mar 5, 2013
