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Hello Anna! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, so a good idea for a poem and you have a good stepping stone here. With have a couple things ...

Well, few tiny minor details. Firstly for this to be a contender in the contest you gotta send me a PM and I'll give you the list of the words. ...

AT LAST! CHAPTER TWO IS HERE :3 I've been waiting.... ;). Now lets see what we got here... "He really is an amazing looking guy. His blue eyes offset his ...

Howdy doo mi amigo! Dogs here back again for your review of the edited version :), lets dive in shall we?! Wonderful correction to the beginning. I laughed a little ...

Spinelli my man! Before I even go into your piece my I just say that your avatar is one of the most excellent things I've ever seen... I'm gonna start ...

Alrighty, building off of what Hannah said, there are soooo many grammar and spelling errors here that it makes this piece so incredibly difficult to read. Firstly, you need to ...

Helllooo there wolves! Waddya know, the wolves are a cousin of mine :), so I have no doubt that they raised you up to be a marvelous poet, and they ...

HELLOO VAL! Dogs here with your review of the day :). Alrighty new style of poetry! Woo hooo! Before I even go on about your poem... may I just say ...

Hello Aley! Dogs here with your review today! Ok to start off I think that this is a great idea for a poem, although I don't think your title is ...

Hello Ikiru! Thank you for your review, so I thought I'd repay the favor. Ok firstly, you start on a slightly weak note with just a door opening. Describe the ...

HEELLOOO WOLFY BOY! It's been a long time =D. I was looking back in the archives of YWS and came across this lovely piece. Now I'm not a master at ...

Hello Skyy! Dogs here with your review today. Ok I really don't have too much to say about this piece because it is pretty good. I like how smooth you ...

Howdy doo Ink! Dogs here with your review of the day! Ok, so I think this has great potential in it. It's a wonderful idea and a great topic to ...

Hello there Infinity! Dogs here with your review today. Firstly if I may say... that Alice and Wonderland is MY FAVVOORRRIITTEEE MOVIE! I also love the name Alice... =D So ...

"I sigh" Have a bit of a tense change here. This should be "I sighed" if he you're working in the past. If it's in the present say: "I let ...