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Hello there Junaid! Dogs here with your review today. To start things off, Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here, if you ever need anything, a review, ...

""Yes." I replied, a smile tugging on my lips as the memory filled my mind." Nice, I love that line, great imagery with the smile tugging on the narrators lips. ...

Hello there Creativity! I haven't seen you lurking about lately, been a little while :). Anywho, Tucker here with your review. Okey dokey, to start I love the idea of ...

"lighting up her already beautiful face" Howdy doo Questio, Dogs here just delivering a review as requested :), You have a nice opening, bringing us into some good imagery. Although ...

"but the constricting jacket keeps the dark contained inside of me" I like your opening, throwing us into the piece with a random description of something from the narrator. It ...

Hello there Birkhoff! Dogs here with your review today. Oh goodness you certainly got some chuckles out of me :), I really liked the subtle implications that you hide in ...

"I glanced aside... she was there" Ok, excellent starting paragraph, way to bring the reader in with some well crafted imagery, setting up the scene for us. Although my only ...

Hello there Inks! Dogs here with your review today :), well firstly welcome to YWS! I noticed that you're relatively new here, if you ever need a review or help ...

"The seven year old boy who stood in front of me was supernatural. Somehow, he could torture me without moving." This sounds a tad bit choppy, maybe try saying something ...

Hello there Hannah! Tucker here with your review today. Ok, to start of congratulations for submitting to the poetry contest! Things are looking really tight this year, lots of excellent ...

Hello there Cailey! Dogs here with your review today! Okey dokey, love the flow of this poem, great topic to write about. Your description of death in your second stanza ...

Hello there Reckoner! Dogs here with your review. To start things off, welcome to YWS! I noticed you're relatively new here and if you ever need some help or a ...

Hello there Prometheus! Dogs here with your review. Firstly, did you get your username from Prometheus the movie, or Prometheus the minor Greek god who gave humans fire? Just out ...

Hello there Niteowl! Dogs here with your review today. Well firstly congratulations for submitting your piece to the poetry prompt contest! Things are looking great because so far I've read ...

Hello there Ben! Tucker here once again with your review, as requested :). I do recall reading this before and loving it, but not putting in a review cause it ...