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  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Who I grew to become

    Hello there Nina! Dogs here with your review today. Firstly WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here. Let me know if you need any help or anything, ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: a pause

    Hello there Persy! Dogs here with your review today. Lovely poem you have here, as always wonderful choice of words and astoundingly smooth poetic writing. Although, me being me I'm ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: The Account of the Noticeably Non-Black Coffee

    "sweet as sin" Oh such an excellent line to be throwing around. It immediately sets up a character even though he has said two lines. Nice job there. "It was ...

    Mar 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Angels Hell - Prologue

    Howdy Unstoppable! Dogs here with your review today! Firstly if I may say: WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here. I'm Tucker and if you need anything, ...

    Mar 26, 2013
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Other Re: Come with me

    Howdy Ariana! Dogs here with your review today. Well this is yet another lovely piece you have, the rhyming scheme really works for the theme of your writing here because ...

    Mar 26, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: One more night

    "hearing little bits of speech and opinion floating into his earpiece" Hello there 100 my friend! Dogs here with your review today, I love the first paragraph. It really draws ...

    Mar 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Turds for the birds!

    Hello there Anna! Dogs here once again with your review today. Random minor note, but if you recognize the grammar errors you have, why not fix them? Anywho, on to ...

    Mar 25, 2013
  • Other » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Scenery Idea's

    Hello there puppy my fine fellow! Its been a little while since I've read some of your work :), and your writing certainly doesn't disappoint. Your descriptions in this piece ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Toutouwai Kakariki

    Hello there Ajit! Dogs here with your review today. Firstly, if I may say: WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if you need ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Dear Poetry

    Hello there Anna! Dogs here with your review today! Firstly I'd like to say I love your avatar, I've been watching it for forever and it still never ceases to ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: Rhapsodic

    Hello there Crystal! Dogs here with your review today! Well lovely poem you have here, excellent use of vocab in your writing. It really reminds me of some of the ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Culture Re: When skies ignite in beauty

    Hello there Ariana! Dogs here with your review today :). Well this is a lovely poem you got here, I like the idea of it and it really leaves a ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: ff

    Hello there Toe! Dogs here with your review today, interesting piece to write about, you have some lovely writing and certainly a true talent in your writing. Although let's address ...

    Mar 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Those Who Were Forgotten

    "all the phone lines were down, there" Howdy Meerkat! Welcome to YWS, I'll be here with your review today. Firstly, there should be a period after "down" in this line, ...

    Mar 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Song of Mankind

    Hello there Sparkle! Dogs here with your review today. Well, lovely poem you have here, I think the first stanza is my favorite, I really like the use of the ...

    Mar 23, 2013


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