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Re: Who I grew to become
Hello there Nina! Dogs here with your review today. Firstly WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here. Let me know if you need any help or anything, ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: a pause
Hello there Persy! Dogs here with your review today. Lovely poem you have here, as always wonderful choice of words and astoundingly smooth poetic writing. Although, me being me I'm ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Account of the Noticeably Non-Black Coffee
"sweet as sin" Oh such an excellent line to be throwing around. It immediately sets up a character even though he has said two lines. Nice job there. "It was ...
Mar 26, 2013 -
Re: Angels Hell - Prologue
Howdy Unstoppable! Dogs here with your review today! Firstly if I may say: WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here. I'm Tucker and if you need anything, ...
Mar 26, 2013 -
Re: Come with me
Howdy Ariana! Dogs here with your review today. Well this is yet another lovely piece you have, the rhyming scheme really works for the theme of your writing here because ...
Mar 26, 2013 -
Re: One more night
"hearing little bits of speech and opinion floating into his earpiece" Hello there 100 my friend! Dogs here with your review today, I love the first paragraph. It really draws ...
Mar 25, 2013 -
Re: Turds for the birds!
Hello there Anna! Dogs here once again with your review today. Random minor note, but if you recognize the grammar errors you have, why not fix them? Anywho, on to ...
Mar 25, 2013 -
Re: Scenery Idea's
Hello there puppy my fine fellow! Its been a little while since I've read some of your work :), and your writing certainly doesn't disappoint. Your descriptions in this piece ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: Toutouwai Kakariki
Hello there Ajit! Dogs here with your review today. Firstly, if I may say: WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if you need ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: Dear Poetry
Hello there Anna! Dogs here with your review today! Firstly I'd like to say I love your avatar, I've been watching it for forever and it still never ceases to ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: Rhapsodic
Hello there Crystal! Dogs here with your review today! Well lovely poem you have here, excellent use of vocab in your writing. It really reminds me of some of the ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: When skies ignite in beauty
Hello there Ariana! Dogs here with your review today :). Well this is a lovely poem you got here, I like the idea of it and it really leaves a ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: ff
Hello there Toe! Dogs here with your review today, interesting piece to write about, you have some lovely writing and certainly a true talent in your writing. Although let's address ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: Those Who Were Forgotten
"all the phone lines were down, there" Howdy Meerkat! Welcome to YWS, I'll be here with your review today. Firstly, there should be a period after "down" in this line, ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: The Song of Mankind
Hello there Sparkle! Dogs here with your review today. Well, lovely poem you have here, I think the first stanza is my favorite, I really like the use of the ...
Mar 23, 2013
