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Re: Trashy Hotel Room
I absolutely loved this poem. Too often, we take for granted everything we are so lucky to have that we don't realize we are lucky to have them. There are ...
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Re: Little soilder
Hey there! I'm Dani and I'm here to leave a quick review. I had to read this piece a few times to really understand it. Lines to remember: The repetition ...
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Re: Love hurts in a way no one can explain
I relate to this so much! I'm going through something like this myself, but I just told my friend I think I'm in love with her the other night. I ...
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Re: The Day I Chose Daddy
This was a tough read for my own personal reasons. The anecdote you shared about your mom reminded me of my experiences with my own mother. The imagery portrayed in ...
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Re: Untitled
This is a wonderful interpretation of the phrase "don't judge a book by it's cover." Something to work on: I think it's always easier to read a passage when the ...
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Re: Away
Wow. So this poem actually gave me school anxiety and I haven't been a student in years. I am a teacher though so I still get that type of anxiety ...
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Re: Makeup interest
One thing really stood out to me because I relate to it; not in the same way, but in a way that reminds me of something I love the way ...
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Re: Cloudy mind
Hi! I'm gonna get right to the review. This poem is short, but says a lot in a limited amount of space. I felt like you were talking right to ...
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Re: Dark
Hey! Dani here to leave a quick and positive review! A line that stuck out to me: On the night of Gwen’s 11th birthday, her parents came in to take ...
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Re: Something I need to confess.
I love this poem. I mentioned yesterday that it has a frantic tone to it. My favorite line is But by the fourth, I felt freedom. because it shows that ...
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Re: In My Dream
I love the vivid imagery in this poem. My stanza to remember: I felt my heart get ripped out of my chest The crimson pool of youth Surrounding my corpse ...
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Re: the end of the world and every time the world has ended
This piece is very thought-provoking and relatable. The first thing your piece made me think of was when we were told the world was going to end in 2012. It ...
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Re: She Was A Child
This one hit me right in the feels. I love how vivid your imagery comes across. I want to give the little girl a hug. My favorite line is So ...
Mar 20, 2024 -
Re: The Fate of the Stars
This is deep. I like the simile of people being like stars. You're absolutely right. My favorite lines: "If only I were anything else... or could become what else I ...
Mar 19, 2024 -
Re: Fantasy
Hey! First I want to say that this piece was thought provoking and left a door open for different interpretations. My favorite part of the passage is: "My dream for ...
Mar 19, 2024
