distantdreamer21

Firstly, I would like to commend you on writing a true, moving piece. I believe it fits the era we live in today with cyber-bullying and how it rages like ...

This is very interesting! I as well loved the book Catcher and the Rye... As Sara stated, I am going to try writing something like this as well I think! ...

Hey! I would just like to start off by saying you have a great topic for this piece! A long distance relationship is not only hard to conquer for the ...

Hey! I agree with Sare, you have a very promising piece here, If you remove some of the grammatical errors. Am I going against fate and destiny, because I cant ...

Hey Alliaaryn! I'm distantdreamer but you can call me dreamer for short. I enjoy the main point you are trying to make here however; there are a few things I ...

This poem was literally outstanding. I felt your pain throughout the piece. It is remarkable of how much strengh she believed she had. Her tragic ending really made a impact ...

Hey! Im Dreamer, this is a great poem you have here, I just have a couple critiques i'd like to make. Key: Blue: Changes Red: What I Like Purple: Comments ...

This quote is fantastic. The line where you mention that you have to "remember to exhale" evokes understanding from the reader that this is a huge step you are about ...

He opened his bronze urn, the home in which your soul would remain, and sucked up the life you had left. I absolutely adored what you wrote here. I feel ...

Hello! I thought your poem was interesting! However; being in high school myself, I had a hard time relating 100% to what you were describing. The part where you mention ...

I loved your poem! It totally relates to society today and what young girls perceive as "good style." The only part that I had a hard time understanding was the ...