Published June 11, 2011
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I absolutely adored what you wrote here. I feel like I can actually picture the deceased person's soul being sucked into the bronze urn.
I’m really not a big fan of poetry but this I really liked. The last stanza was my favourite.
^ I loved that so much.
Well done. Keep writing