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Re: Volunteer's Remorse
Hi! I like how blunt and straightforward this poem is. Normally topics like these are more lyrical and the writing is much more purple, but this was straight to the ...
Jan 8, 2014 -
Re: When the Sun Shines
Hi! I'm going to review your short story today. Just so you know, I edited this the way I would edit my own writing. Normally I only review poems because ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: 58 Poppies
Hi! I'm going to review your lovely poem The first thing I have to get off my chest is that after reading it once, I had to read it a ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: pauses against the impulse to sound clever
I've only read the first stanza and already I know it's a freaking fantastic poem. Let me start off by saying your word choice is phenomenal. "Didactic deities...whispered to my ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: depleted batteries with a famous celebrity
Hi! I'm going to review your wonderful poem. First off, I have to say you write extremely well and the poem flows smoothly from idea to idea. I also really ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Illusion - Prologue
Hi, I'm going to review this wonderful piece of work today. :) I'd like to start off by saying how beautiful you write. It's like listening to a captivating speaker ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Dearest Abby- Chapter 1
Hi! I am going to review your work today :D First I'd like to say that I have not finished reading it yet while I'm writing this. I was so ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: Who is the King of the Playground?
Hi! I'm here to review your poem! First off, I loved it. The title caught my attention pretty quickly and, at first, I wasn't sure I wanted to read it, ...
Sep 29, 2013 -
Re: He Changed Everything
Hi, I'm Dianne. Let me start off with this statement: I could not get past the first paragraph without starting this review, so I actually still don't entirely know what ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: Scar
Hi! I really liked this story. It really shed some light on physical appearance, especially deformities that are unavoidable. Your main character is very realistic and it's easy for the ...
Apr 24, 2013 -
Re: NaPoWriMo #2
Wow. That was astonishing to read, which is a great accomplishment really. I don't mean that in the sense that I'm some sort of literary snob or anything, but I ...
Apr 9, 2013
