diamond_eyes

wow! that was really good!! its a great prologue but i think that before you start writing the story u should write more about Saase..just a suggestion...but other than that ...

hey!! its sooooooooooooo soooooooooooo sooooooooooo good! save that for english class too! 4+++ lol wow im speechless! keep up the good work :wink: :D

hey that was a really good story...u described the characters very well..and it didnt turn out like i thought, which made it even more interesting...wow i couldnt stop reading..the setting ...

hey that was a good poem :) and it was funny in a cute way -->lol does that make sense? :wink: good job!

hey this is really good :D i like how you used short sentences..and the poem speaks for itself good job! :wink:

i'm not too good at critiques... when i read it, i felt what you where expressing and i really like how you compared nature with love..funny how they're kind of ...

well id have to disagree with all of you, i think its a great poem! although he needs a little practice bcuz some lines dont really fit in with the ...

wow thats a sad story, but sad ending for u... :cry: even tho there was no kisses and that kind of stuff it was soo was great! :)