Hi.
I liked your poem.
It rings true to the life of a 'geek' and I love the title! It's inticing!
Now I'm in a bit of a catch 22 here as I loved the way you made it ryhme and kept it relevent to the poem (That's a hard skill to master you know!) but, at the same time, I'm thinking that maybe the rhyme was aq bit forced.
Maybe try writing the poem in a non-rhyming way and see if you like it.
But, hey, that's just my personal opinion.
Thanks for the read,
Woozey
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