demoncat

So I just realized that I made some mistakes when writing the second chapter so I will change it soon. I accidentally renamed the characters in the second chapter whoops ...

Thank you for the review I will make the changes soon.

Thank you so much for the review I promise to with more soon. And I'll fix that part too.

Hello demoncat here to review this poem. I did enjoy this like alot. It really grabs the readers attention. Although the wording could flow alittle better. Maybe add a Transition ...

There is a part two coming! So the backstory will be in that it's just I've had so.e technical difficulties and have to eventually rewrite it... So keep an eye ...

I planned on writing the second part soon but it deleted itself instead of posting so I gotta rewrite it but it is coming.

Thx I'll do that when I have time

I'll try... Though im really bad with electronics. I could barely find out how to post this lol.

Thank you so much for your advice I will put it to good use. I appreciate it so much. And I will be making the next part soon. I have ...

Srry its gonna be a review. But it was to short. I didn't have enough comments it was too good.

Thank you I thought maybe the third person wasnt the best idea. And I see what you mean with the makeup. I put that there because if my boyfriend came ...

Thank you I thought maybe the third person wasnt the best idea. And I see what you mean with the makeup. I put that there because if my boyfriend came ...

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Hello it's demoncat revewing. And I must say this poem is great. So you graduated or something? That's what I'ma getting from this. I think I really wanna write a ...

Hey it's demoncat here for a review. I really like this poem. It is very deep.i like the imagry you use, and the way you portray these characters. It's a ...

Ooh I will most definitely check it out!!! Consider me a fan! %uD83D%uDE01