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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: And Slowly I Heal

    Pingu did the needed verse. So, this is too bland, and too telly. It's like you're writing a script. Personally it seems that you didn't proof read. "Lauren, you've got ...

    Apr 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sitting in a sea full of people

    Sitting in a sea full of people All around Yet I’m still alone Sitting in a sea full of people They are talking Not to me Sitting in a sea ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Secret.

    Not just a secret, this was bigger Blocked out for so long Denying its existence I lied for months To everyone, but most of all Myself. I just wouldn’t believe ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Free

    Wild and free, like a bird of the tree. Like a wild young horse, dancing ‘cross the fields. Like a breath of wind, dancing ‘cross the sky. Like a bright ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: That's all

    Here's a little dose of my NaPoWriMo work, one of the few things I've written so far that's worth anything. Enjoy! Is this all that I can do? To sit ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Getting Over

    **This is a short poem that I wrote for a friend of mine. Please tell me what you think of it. My feelings for you have gone, Banished forever as ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Anniversary

    This is way off my usual scheme of things and I feel totally wrong posting it, but I wrote it on the spur of the moment and thought I could ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Changes

    This is my first poem, and I wrote it really quickly, and spontaneously, but if I hadn't I don't think I would have got the same feeling across, but I ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Blue Moon

    This is the first poem I've ever written. The poem that made me realize that I like writing. Written when I was in 5th grade(I'm incoming 7th now) for Reading ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Friendship (revised)

    F riendship is precious, once in a lifetime, R arer than rare, gained only by time I mmortal, lasts forever E ven through time, it cannot sever N ever perfect, ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Better View

    Imagine you and I go back in time to see life through a child’s eye, Climb onto a little blue kite and sail into the big blue sky, Gaze down ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Doble Cara

    Love wasn't abolished. It was bloody made in sheer fantasies of bloody unions. Love wasn't reaped. It was bloody forever sown to dwell in the abyss of Damnation. Love wasn't ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Fortune

    Again, something from awhile ago that I took another look at. Fortune: Halt for love, But stop for fear; Never will you Find hope here! Love to live But hope ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Accident

    [pre]I crept to the room slowly, a hesitant shadow, his arms outstretched, beckoning, a bloody indication, silent save the occasional gulp, eyes wide with shock. I moved toward him calmly, ...

    Apr 12, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Stars the Poem

    Alright, I'll admit it - I am simply horrible at poetry. But every once in a while I get the strangest urge. Why the urge wants me to do poetry, ...

    Apr 12, 2008


I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart; I am, I am, I am.
— Sylvia Plath