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Thanks. I skipped over some of your notes, just because I'm a little rushed this morning, but I will be going over it. Thanks for the review! I'll keep your ...

Ooh, I didn't actually think of that. All in all, brilliant poem!

XD XD okay. whoooops

I REALLLLY LIKE THE ENDING (LAST 3 LINES) I FELT SO PROUD AND I STILL CANT STOP BEING PROUD Boi

Awwwwweeee thanks freennnnnn

Haha, I understand. The sarcasm was what I thought was most likely, but I thought I should still bring it up haha

They were thankful!

I can see where some of your notes were coming from, but when Ben said "Well it was right in the middle of the road" the "Well" was more a ...

That's dumb. Ugh, boys.

Well, he should figure it out. It sounds like you deserve to be treated fairly. If he's just going to keep avoiding you, I think you should confront him. He ...

....and I forgot to mark that as a review. *msdhkfngsfnxsmjdfgsfg smbdsjfgkdgsjdgf*

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Awwwwe, that is actually so cute!

I swear it won't be awfully long. It shouldn't be any more than double the size of the prologue, at the very most!