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I honestly don't know the meaning of this poem. (I don't care about grammar.;) ) I think, I think, I think, it was about the narrator confronting his subconscious. Does ...

I didn't get the title at first, but now I understand. The narrator doesn't want to wake up, because she/he had a good dream, but it was sad because they ...

When I read the first paragraph, I was hooked. I thought that this was going to be a little bit like Toy Story, but it wasn't like that at all. ...

This somehow reminds me of Father Time, and how he takes things away quietly. (Aka, demolish) This was greatly formatted and the style was intriguing. I don't do poetry much, ...

Well, this was interesting. I find that I like Lady Sophia and Eleanour very much. And it should be 'You and I.' Onto the review. This was well thought out ...

Well, congratulations on publishing this! This was a great piece and I like how you did it in third person but was with the thought of Kate and-that thing the ...

Just a friendly little talk with myself. :D I found this to be a great piece of work and I really enjoyed this. The other voice was really nice and ...

Well, that's me if I was ever in a situation like that. I think I'd ramble off about writing, seeing as I'm afraid of the silence. Wonder what he/she would ...

Well...This was an interesting read. I liked the unexpectedness of this story, also with the format and the way you write. This was a good idea and I honestly hope ...

Uh... This kinda reminded me of somebodies signature: "So I ask you...Serve In Heaven Or Rule In Hell?" I forgot whose it was, but I think that they are similar, ...

Oh wow. I can see that you are improving with each chapter that you post. I really like the way you write and I think that this is a very ...

This seems like something from Divergent from the Abnegation faction manifesto. Never heard of it? Go ahead and read it, great book. I agree with it. Greed Hate And Concupiscence ...

This was shorter than I expected. What the hell is wrong with the other girls? Good job with the writing... Maybe a little bit more of something, like history and ...

That's a...bit... morbid. I don't see what the narrator is trying to say. Truth be told I would think it's talking about a condemned death sentence. Almost like the narrator ...

That's one crappy friend. You'll have to excuse my language. Richie and the other guy. I can honestly tell you that one way to plan a cliff jumping is by ...