defendthelegend

Hello I am going to review this Here we go again Crystal said (said is a boring word, try using something different, to balance out your vocabulary, if you are ...

yes,I agree with the above It does sound like it is based on personal experience of some sort? If it isnt then you have got a great mind XD. This ...

wow what an original idea. I write poetry, but this is one of the first times I have come across something like this. People tend to write less of these ...

this is a really good poem. I love all the contrast It is such a good idea When i saw the title i was thinking oh boring i will look ...

This is hilerious (however you spell that) It really fits in very well. I was listening to the song at the same time, and it was perfectly in time. well ...

Hello =) Overall I think that generally it is a nice well written piece. But however, I think that it could flow better. As your poem is a rhyming poem, ...

Hello EpsonBelenus, Your lyrics: choices long loathing on a wall, are set out in a completly different way to what one would normall exect, this however could defeat the whole ...

Hello :] I would love to review. Gramatical Structure Overall, the layout and structure, is fine. But could be better, by decreasing the amount written on certain lines. But, it ...

Hello Everyone else has pretty much covered everything I was going to say, but to be honest that was really good. It flowed really well and I really enjoyed reading ...

Heya :D I am going to review your work today. There is only one true beast left on earth; a beast so powerful, a beast so strong, a beast so ...

Hello :D If you do not mind (although it will be too late by the time I have submitted this) I would like to review your poem. So here we ...

Hello I will review yours today! I remember the day Commar after 'day', and capital letter for 'the' fear came knocking at my door full stop after 'door' and capital ...

yeah, the title fits in really well. you don't need to change it at all. plus don't forget that yours is better, and will always be :D no, but seriously ...

some michael jackson quotes And I remember going to the record studio and there was a park across the street and I'd see all the children playing and I would ...

hello. That's really good for your first go! As a new writer the best things you can do is look at the resources page, and especially for poetry look up ...