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hey Huff Puff! I'm glad to see you've added an additional chapter. This story has a lot of potential and I think that in the future, you'll be able to ...

This was truly amazing. I really loved it!! A clear poem with a strong voice. Exactly what I needed today. :) I loved the way you set up this poem. ...

How can I critique a work like this? Answer: I can't. It's too amazing! First of all, this poem was incredibly original. Too many poems start to look so similar ...

Hey Rai! I'm Ella and I'll be reviewing your fabulous poem today! First of all, I agree with Vyper. Punctuation is sometimes confusing and hard to us, but it is ...

Before I start my pathetic excuse for a review, let me say something. Aw!!! :] This was fabulous. It was touching and imperfect, which I liked. Sometimes poems seem too ...

Good work, KnightlyAngel! I'm dd9 and here is my sorry excuse for a review. I apologize, but it's hard to review a piece so touching without saying "AW!!!" every other ...

Hey JC! This is an IOU. I'll be back early tomorrow morning to review this. I'm so tired though that I don't want to give you a lazy review! Expect ...

Hey!!! I saw that you haven't had any reviews. Maybe if you post this in poetry than more people will view it. I'm about to go eat food right now, ...

Hey, let me just say, I find this piece remarkable! I'm dd9 by the way, and on this night, I will be reviewing this wonderful piece of poetry. First of ...

Hey Warrior! I'm dd9, your some-what flawed review for tonight. I'm going to go through your piece with my advice in bold, FYI. Oh Because You never tried You shouldn't ...

Hey GAM. I'm dd9 and I'll be doing a little (maybe more like meduim sized) review for you this lovely day. First of all, I really liked this poem. I ...

Hey Eimear! I'm dd9. Anywho, here is my critique. If it stinks, my apologizes ahead of time. Make friends with the rain, sing to the big brass moon I think ...

Hey! I'm dd9 and I'll be doing a little review today. :] First of all, I have to say that I love the fact that you have an exclamation point ...

Hey! I'm dd9. I'll be doing a little review for you today. :] I think you have a good concept here, but to be honest, the poem does need some ...

I'll come back to critique this later. You've got an IOU for today. But there are somethings I'd like to adress. First of all, Reviewing on your own piece to ...