davidechoe13

Thanks!

Thanks for the review! Old York is in fact a fifferent place i will definately work on clarifying everything!

Thank you so much for the review!

Alrighty will do! Thanks so much!

Will do haha!

Alrighty! Thank you so much for the read i really, really appreciate it. I will definitely add some detail, please if you don't mind check out chapters 2,3, and 4. ...

I have edited the piece and would be honored if you would check it again, thanks!

My computer was glitched when i tried to submit this chapter, as maybe you noticed it's not an essay it is part two of my story.

Alright! Thank you!

Thank you so much for the review I really appreciate it!

Sorry for font sizes, and length.

Thank you for our view on it. The character David Echoe is actually supposed to be like that, and more will be explained about him further on in the story.

thank you for reading and thank you so much for writing a review i love every little bit of help! thank you soooooooo much!!!!

Thank you for reviewing and thanks for reading and the support! your awesome!

Hey, good job on the story i'm pretty sure the others reviewed your work quite nicely so i just wanted to say WELCOME! sorry if i'm a little late doing ...