darko.demark666

Edited! Thank you very "nice"...haha...oh..Evi

Just because....lol... funny guy u r...

Inside every writer is this unrelenting passion that refuses to stop existing. Every time we write we need to tap into that source of passion. ever heard of Baudelaire? He ...

I'll be quick... -"Repair" your punctuation. -correct the cAPS in the beginning of the sentence after that -stretch some of your verses and skew the others... -make sure the rhythm ...

Yeah, June said the same thing..haha..nevermind, thanks.. I'm fixing it at the moment...

You couldn't know... thanks anyway..

Instead of just allowing us to read through this smoothly, we have to like... piece together what the meaning of the word you're using is and we shouldn't have to, ...

Hi, I just have three things to say: 1 - This poem would be great with rhyme. Every last verse of every stanza just screams for rhyme... 2 - Last ...

Well, it's wasn't funny...actually, you make a big moron out of yourself...;)

you don't need punctuation... I can't believe the people criticizing you for not having it :@ I just suggested that s/he expresses his/her thoughts in a stronger way. It works ...

The three verse stanzas are a bit odd like the others said. Actually, I said they are a little bit strange when you connect them with the four verse stanzas, ...

What is this forum turned into??? The moderators really need to do something. Go fight somewhere else!

Lol...poetry isn't words spilled on a piece of sh...paper...

Punctuation is screaming....

What did I do with that bold letters???? Arghhhhhhh....*dies*