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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: BOREDOM

    B y clear skies liberty flies O r else desire slowly dies R andom letters and numbers E rrors and questions and slumbers D ay by day anxiety sighs unlearning ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Water and Glass

    Where water and glass meet My world falls apart Nice picture, but still..how can your world fall apart where water and glass meet? The tainted water that touches his lips ...

    Mar 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Seasons of Ice || His Eyes

    I. They are cold in photographs -- Could you explain me what does this do??? It's not wrong, just..I don't know what it means... what springs they could wither in ...

    Mar 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Kalyug

    Kalyug The skies darken As the sun dies Did you want to put a period here or it was just a mistake because without the period here the stanza is ...

    Mar 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: You can't buy me over

    This poem came out really good when I was randomly writing. Hope you like it! When I see your eyes, There is nothing to despise, But all those boyish lies, ...

    Mar 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Elegy for Columbine

    Dedicated to all who have felt the sorrows of the Columbine shooting. And also to Rachel Scott, victim of the shooting. Rest in peace. ------------------------------------ Elegy for Columbine Thirteen

    Mar 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pretenses

    Pretenses. [A poetry] Even if you kiss me, it won't feel so right. Even if you hug me, it won't be too tight. How can you possibly know that? Even ...

    Mar 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: What's a Girl to Do?

    What's a girl to do when there are no more tears, no more options[s],[/s] and no more resolutions? What's a girl to do when there are no more straws to ...

    Mar 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: .

    I’ve spread my wings, I’m ready to fly, You could put a period here also, but it's okay. Why must you stop me one more time, To say goodbye? I ...

    Mar 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Feebly Hell You're In.

    Macbeth, huh? Funny thing is I also reading it and tried to do something about it...I didn't succeed. lol ------------------------------------------------- A grim's tale I would further not resort to

    Mar 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Quilt

    I'm just like my favorite quilt : Full of memories, Covered in random colors[s],[/s] and the stains we call regret. Not only is the patchwork semi-pretty , but it's all ...

    Mar 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My 21st century Prince Charming, a love sonnet

    Hi Velvet.whispers...( you really have to tell us your name :( ) My knight is proud, arrogant, stubborn and tall. His armour is of leather, his visor of plastic. When ...

    Mar 20, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Does the city sleep?

    I used this poem as extra credit for my Language Arts class...enjoy! ___________________________________________________________________________________ Does the city sleep? Daylight brings noise and

    Mar 20, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: Science-related essay.

    Did someone explained to you what essay should be like? There's no spacing... You're starting the sentences with "and"... Your punctuation should be in order, this is not poetry, here's ...

    Mar 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Loser

    The Loser by KISBA the seconds pass fast and your heart sings to you low "you will outlast just keep your door closed ..." This isn't a rhyme windows locked: ...

    Mar 19, 2009


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