darkdove

made it shorter.

i like it because it remains me of some indie drama...but i don't get it either but thats what i like about it. I just need to read more to ...

i like it. its like if Panic! at the Disco did a rap song. its cool.

i like this poem its like nothing i've read before.

i liked it espaecially the twist wasn't excepting it. i did think it was your dad. i disagree with M.B too i liked how it was something different. i also ...

its only temporary.

i like it, it was alil cliche but its cool i mean i know how you feel in the poem

i like it,sort wish there was more to it. But itsvery very candid. i like thoguh

her death is more of a metaphor.

revisisons have been made!!!!

i liked it, it was to the point and it was sad. its a good poem :)

i liked it, its very symbolic. i think it w\means something else. anyways i like it

i liked the piece. its obvious that it isn't a poem but i think its funny.

i think your poem is awesome. never actually read anything like it. your a natural