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Re: Through These Eyes Chapter I
Haha you're welcome.
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Just Breathe
to the person right above me. A poem is meant to be a certain way so reader reacts a certain way. In this poem, the length is mean to make ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Just Breathe
To the guy who asked, the person in this poem is none of the things you stated. This person is an extension of me, of who I am and what ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Just Breathe
Thanks for the comment. By the way I don't know if you meant to say epoem or not, but since it's an epoem, am I am epoet? I'll change the ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Redemption
First, thanks for the comments. Next, this poem wasn't really for everyone else. It was more for me, for me to look at. i appreciate the comments, I really do, ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: Aftermath (Another poem my friend who died and I coauthored)
Thanks. He would appreciate those comments.
May 12, 2011 -
Re: A Phantom or Memory? (poem written by friend died recently)
Thank you everyone. I will be posting more soon.
May 6, 2011 -
Re: The Death of Bieber
this was hilarious! I liked it. Funny satire.
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: True Freedom
I enjoyed this poem. It has sorrow, and hope at the same time. It wasn't perfect, but for your first post on here that was pretty good. Keep writing. Also ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Animal
I would also like to thank everyone for their support and reviews. It means a lot to me getting criticism from other writers. It has helped me improve tremendously.
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: [deleted]
This poem was good. I liked the use of language and imagery here. I usually say something about punctuation because many people overlook that, but this poem, even though there ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Who Am I
You should probably lock this topic because you are getting only negative reviews. And FYI i didn't say you were a childish writer, I said and I quote : This ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Animal
Than you. I really appreciate it.
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Animal
Thank you friend. I really appreciate it.
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Holy Communion
Well, it is a good poem, but I cannot comment further without getting into a religious debate. It is well written. Good Job. But I'm an Atheist, so for the ...
Apr 25, 2011
