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dante93

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: My Smiles to The Reaper

    I really like the context of this poem, though I thought it could have been written a little better. It seems a bit short for my taste. I could actually ...

    Apr 22, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Love For The Ice Queen

    Thank you for your likes. I appreciate all the comments and feedback I can get. I actually thought this would be a poem people tore apart.

    Nov 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I am Michael

    You might want to format this right.

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Nightmare or Reality?

    I haven't thought about this poem in a long time. Haha. Thanks for the compliment.

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: relationship abuse

    I was just looking through random pages when i found this, and decided to comment on it. This poem was unorganzied, and bit weird, but not overall bad. I liked ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Journey

    I agree with the above review, even though I too already reviewed this, but to me it seemed a bit abrupt. If it is what is meant to be the ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Indefinite Blue

    Just got through getting some answers actually, and figured out a meaning in and of itself by re-reading it when I wasn't doing a thousand things. But, he said to ...

    Oct 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mother May I

    The poem was supposed to be a bit of a monologue. I'm not going to change much in the poem, but I will look at it again. Thanks for the ...

    Oct 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: ...

    I actually really liked this poem, which is unusual because most poems have such a whinny tone. The language in this poem was good. The execution was superb, and the ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: By That Which You Destroyed

    Funny thing is, I'm already seeing one.

    Sep 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Future

    I did not like this poem at all. It was jumbled, and really made no sense to me. The title is Future, but you do not really get that picture ...

    Sep 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Nightmare or Reality?

    Thank you all. Appreciate the support.

    Jul 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Nightmare or Reality?

    Thanks.

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Nightmare or Reality?

    Thanks.

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Perfect world

    I didn't quite understand this poem, because it seems to me like it is a bunch of gibberish. No offense. I'd re-write this, unless that is what you were intending.

    Jul 12, 2011


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