dante93

I haven't been on here in a while and this just happened to be the first poem I came across. I actually enjoyed this poem. It is quite simple, bare ...

I think this poem has some real promise. Most of the things you should change about it are minor, but it has everything necessary to be a great poem. It ...

For some reason I like this poem. It's not particularly great, but it does have a message. It simply brings to mind this topic, but I've had a lot of ...

I didn't think this poem was really very graphic. If you really want to read a graphic poem that can both disgust and amaze you I have many of those. ...

I struggled making myself read through this, but not because it was fantastically written, but because it is written a bit juvenile. The theme is very easy to understand, but ...

I expected this poem to be better than it was. I felt as thoough you did not capture the emtion that should have been in this poem. It is first ...

For the context the spoiler gives us, I did not really see much in the way of an insane person. Perhaps a little lost in the actual person, but the ...

For the first reviewer, the title of George Orwell's Novel was not 1983, it was 1984. And there was in no way a reference to it. Second, I've seen a ...

I agree with ancientforever, this poem was rather weak, and to me seems incomplete. It is also rather abrupt, and emotion is present is some parts, but is rushed in ...

Personally, I did not like this poem. I wrote a piece somewhat similar to this a few days ago about how much i hate this mother, but to me this ...

The idea of this poem is strong, but there are a few flaws with the presentation that diminish the quality of this poem. I can see the direction you were ...

Ah, here is yet another good poem by you my friend. I enjoyed this short little poem. It is simple, and well written, with a strong positive message. Change, is ...

This poem was great, and the others on here who say they are not often impressed by poems on here, or are not truly struck by them are right. I ...

This poem is sound like something straight out of the bible. Seriously. It either sounds like that, or it sounds like a preacher preaching it. The grammar is fine, and ...

It all seems to be the same thing said, but yes this poem needs to be expanded. It is very cryptic, yet clear at the same time. A bit paradoxical ...