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Hello, it's me! Plot: I absolutely loved your plot it was new and interesting. This was a really well thought out and original plot. Characters: I love the name you ...

Hello, Its me! First of all, love the first sentence it's relatable, funny and grabs the readers attention. A few small things that could be fixed are is in the ...

Hello, its me! I really enjoyed reading these. My favorite one was number 9. Though you shouldn't call theses all haiku because even though you mention in parentheses. The first ...

Hello, its me! Plot: This was an amazing start to a novel. I am this is a really good firsts chapter with a really good introduction and plot it is ...

Hello, its me again! Plot: I loved this plot I don't know if Matthew is a subplot or part of the main one. I guess I will just have to ...

Hello, its me! Plot: The idea you have come up with is amazing I loved the whole thing! Characters: Since, it is only the beginning I can't really judge you ...

Hello, its me! I loved this poem the concept was amazing and it was well written. The only problem with it is punctuation. Your first sentence "what is living without ...

Hello, its me! Plot: It may just be me but I didn't really get what was going on here. Is the girl kidnapped or in a relationship she is afraid ...

Hello, me again! I honestly like this one way more than the last part. Plot: I loved the plot of this part and you kept it consistent with the first ...

Hello, its me! When I review this I'm going to hit the main things like plot, characters, and grammatical errors. Plot: I like gore and weird/ messed up stuff. This ...

Hello, its me! First of all I would like to point out how beautiful this short story was. Your vocabulary was excellent. Especially when you used the word "painstakingly". You ...

Hello, its me! This is an excellent prologue. Once I started reading I couldn't stop. It kept me interested from the beginning to the end wanting more. I didn't see ...

Hello, its me! Sorry if this is a really short review. This was powerful. I think when you are a writer the ability to write something so powerful is amazing. ...

Hello, its me! This is just a nit picky thing but I think that even though it's a poem you still need punctuation and capitalization. That is just my opinion ...

Hello, its me This will be a short review. I loved this poem. It was impeccably written. I may not be a poetry master but I know a good poem ...