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Hey there! First of all I'll just say this isn't something I'm a big fan of, I for the life of me do not understand what the fascination is with ...
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Not really my style but it's very well written! No spelling or grammatical mistakes that I could catch. Your MC reminds me of a friend of mine(a lot!) and so ...
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Re: The Enemy Chapter 5
Chapter Five Coren: Age 10 It takes me ten minutes to realize where I’m running too. The suburban sidewalk is leading me straight to Claralynn’s house. My best and only ...
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Hello, everyone! I had this part of the first chapter written already, but now that I read it again I think I might have to change it abit. I wrote ...
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Re: Chapt 3:Not after everything we'd shared.
Yay I have some answers! Adopted hmm? Nice twist! This chapter was a good one as you finally are starting to tie up some loose ends but yet still leave ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Chapt 2:Not after everything we'd shared
Back again! Where is Luke???? I want to know where he is soo badly and why he won't tell her anything? Is he sick with a terminal illness? Hiding from ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Chapt 1:Not after everything we'd shared..
Hey Kakagirl, here Iam as promised! *cracks knuckles and starts reading....... Well ok here goes. Everything has pretty much already been said but I'll just give you my review anyways! ...
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Re: Over The Mountains- 2
Alright, you wanted me to be honest and I will on this one, just so you know in advance! I had a feeling buried deep in my stomach. A weird ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Childhood.
Wow, this was truly beautiful. I have no negative comments whatsoever and I'll join in the rest of the reviewers in saying I CAN RELATE! This made me try and ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
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For a minute at the beginning I thought the criminal was the detective hehe. Again, solid work. I love everything about this time in history, this is right up my ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
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Tyler I take my hat off to you on this one. This was a good piece! The story flowed easily and although you struggled a little bit with descriptions like ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Over The Mountains- 1
Plunging my hand in the bucket right beside me, I felt the cold water against my warm palm, feeling eyes staring at me as I retreat retreived a sponge from ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: I'm All Your Living For
I really liked this although it seemed a bit cliche and the idea wasn't new or original by any means. Girl sees Boy, Girl likes Boy, Boy doesn't like Girl. ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The Blanket
Hey there :) *rubs hands together because they're frozen solid at the tips Didn't really know what to expect from this one, and you surprised me I must say. I ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
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Chapter 1 Rowan stood rooted to the spot at the sight of the performer juggling three flaming torches. The night disappeared by the fire that leapt from his mouth as ...
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