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I loved this stanza... Don't you ever wonder how it works? As if to every man the gods gave but five words of beauty in their lives, and deep inside ...

This is awesome! I love this stanza— The clouds hang above, like monsters over the dry ground. They threaten a storm, but she knows better. The last stanza is very ...

I like the rhythm this has—the rhyming seems natural and the line breaks are well done. There are just a few spots that could improve: She sat and scribbled their ...

I love the rhythm this poem has, the line breaks are very well done. I would suggest changing these few lines, I am not cruelty; I am not greed. I ...

I like the ambience this poem has... very crisp and sweet. The ending did seem shaky, the last word sounded repetitive because just a few lines previous you said, "you ...

I didn't really like this, to be perfectly honest. It takes a few readings to make sense of and the rhyming seems unorganized. Your ideas are nice, and I can ...

I agree with what emotion_less said about the poem seeming to be built around the last line--it was a good last line, I'll give you that. The rest of the ...

I like this... the only thing, as was already mentioned, is your use of "apart", which i'm assuming you meant "a part". The fourth stanza (Will you find me?/I'm lost ...