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I really only have one thing to say...I liked this!

I love this! It has a fun beat and is very easy to read. I just wanted to point out that on the word Art you posted two A's! Probably ...

The stars look so pretty, Just a little kitty. I ment to say "Just like a little kitty" I'll edit that now.

Hey, thanks for the reviews guys! I'll keep working on what you have said with my other work. -Cupcake :D

*looks confused* This is different, I like differeent. I don't really get the point of this poem. Keep writing! :D

I liked it. I don't know why anyone would do something like that to anyone. Keep writing! :D

I don't really get the point of this poem, especially the last line. I think you need to rewrite this.

I really like this poem. It's so good. I can't see any way to improve it. Well done and keep writing. :D

You're right! Time does go quickly. I hadn't really thought about that much. I geuss, if you look on the bright side there is a saying "Time flys when you're ...

I liked it. I was good. I don't think I could live without Google (or Young Writers Society). Well done and keep writing! :D

Thanks guys! :D

I saw this and had to read it (mainly because I love peacocks). I like the first stanza the best. In my opinion peahens aren't that ugly.

This poem is great. I don't really have anything else to say. Keep writing! :)

I like it. It was different but good.

I like the idea of this poem, but I do agree with the others, it could be set out differently. Apart from that I liked it. Keep writing! :D