Books

by cupcake

Published January 23, 2011

Big books,
Small books,
Books with lots of pages.

Thick books,
Thin books,
Books for all the stages.

Long books,
Short books,
Books with cats and dogs.

Fun books,
Real books,
Books with different blogs.

Good books,
Bad books,
Books that are inbetween.

Life books,
Art books,
Books that make you keen.

Books, books, so many books,
You'll never read them all.

Books, books, so many books,
Read them anywhere at all.

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earendil
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earendil wrote a review Review · Feb 4, 2011

Haha. I could see this fitting really well into a children's book or something. It has that sort of rhythm and rhyme where when you read it, you can't help but smile a bit. I usually don't care for this particular style of poetry, but this was pretty good. Keep it up!

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Amberla93
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Amberla93 commented Comment · Feb 4, 2011

Hi there!

I don't know why, but this made me laugh. Books are amazing by the way, all of them. They just are, because they are books! I love how light hearted this is, tis refreshing to see a poem that dosen't make me sad. I loved it!

Great job!

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cupcake
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cupcake commented Comment · Feb 4, 2011

RayneBow wrote:I love this! It has a fun beat and is very easy to read.
I just wanted to point out that on the word Art you posted two A's! Probably just a typo!

Life books,
AArt books,
Books that make you keen.

Whoops! I'll just fix that now.

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RayneBow
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RayneBow commented Comment · Feb 4, 2011

I love this! It has a fun beat and is very easy to read.
I just wanted to point out that on the word Art you posted two A's! Probably just a typo!

Life books,
AArt books,
Books that make you keen.

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Alpha
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Alpha wrote a review Review · Feb 2, 2011

Hi!
A really great poem!
My only comment is about this line:

Good books,
Bad books,
Books that are inbetween


Putting 'in-between' kind of broke the rhythm.
I guess you can do it if you read 'that are in' as one syllables...
That's it!
I'd love to read the poems you might write in the future; You show great potential!
Take care,
Cheers!
Alpha

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cupcake
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cupcake commented Comment · Jan 24, 2011

Thanks guys! :D

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Maybury
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Maybury wrote a review Review · Jan 24, 2011

I like it, it's simple, bouncey and fun, all can be very good things. :)
Also anything that praises books, always good and will automatically interest me. I like the style who have of rhyming stanza to stanza. well done and keep up the good work. :)

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TheCodex
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TheCodex wrote a review Review · Jan 23, 2011

Love it :D I love books too, also, the format of this poem is nice. Nice to have someone else on this site into humorous rhyme poetry :D



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