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Hello lovethelifeulive! I enjoyed reading your story. It has an interesting plot. There is just one thing I noticed, but it was probably only a typo. ““Sir, I know can ...

Hello CuteJackRussell! I like this poem. It has great imagery. There are just a few things I would correct. A breathtaking sigh escapes from my lips, I don't think you ...

Hello jolene15. Don't know what to do, lost everywhere I go, don't know what direction I should take, stuck in every moment that I make, I'm buried knee high deep ...

This poem speaks the truth!!! :D Even though I'm reasonable at math I absoloutely HATE it! I love how you put "mwahahahah" in the title, it got my attention. There ...

I think this could be extented and turned into a great novel. You could also make it into a longer short story and extend the idea a little. I think ...

I love this poem. It's short, but very well written. As far as I can tell it is original. I like how you presented it. Keep up the great work ...

Hello emoticon220! I like this poem, don't get me wrong, but it very similar (almost the same) to a poem my drama teacher read to me from a poetry book. ...

I liked this poem. I can see how you don't understand it fully, but to me that seems like not understanding it made it better. That could just be me ...

I love this poem! It is so original. I really only have one nitpick. After every word you put a full stop aprt from one. Tap. Tap. Scratch. Start. Strike ...

Hello sarebear, I agree with the rhyming thing halogirl4197 said. Apart from that I thought it was great. It is good to have a change from sad, heavy-hearted poems. Keep ...

I like this poem. I thought it was great apart from the fact you didn't capitalize your I's. My favourite part was this. i know that what i've experienced helped ...

I love this poem. It's simple but sweet. My favourite part was Not seeing us eye to eye, But feeling us heart to heart. Think this is such a great ...

I like this. I think it's great. I also like the subject and how you fit in all the reviewing team names as well. That's all really. Keep writing (and ...

This is a really good story. I liked it. There are a few mistakes though. Most of them are probably just typos. Looking at the floor she felt the hollow ...

Hello CuteJackRussel! I think this poem is great. It has alot of emotion. Just a couple of things. It all happened in a blur, I tried to keep calm and ...